Hi Sam, Be sure to post your essay for the current project. The question is posted on the course blog a the top. This is also due for Monday: All, Here’s the on-line assignment for today (since I’ve had to cancel class due to the weather) If you are unable to leave these comments below, please email them to me!
1. Visit 5 of your classmates blogs at this link and leave constructive comments: http://www.art105bcc.blogspot.com/
2. Your comment must cover the following: Which three design principles could be considered more carefully in order to improve your (5) classmate’s overall designs, and how should these principles be specifically implemented? Be very specific to receive full credit. Remember, you are critique five (5) different projects made by five of your classmates.
3. With each of the five (5) designs you chose for question #1, choose one (1) personality “word/term” and describe how this word could be adjusted in order to reflect its meaning more accurately. Which design principles should be implemented (and how should they be specifically used) in order to get the “word or personality term” to express its meaning more directly?
i agree with the other comments and its a little top heavy but has nice flow from top to bottom but could use a little more contrast. but nice descriptive words...good work
I really enjoy this piece. I also love the words you chose and the truth you put into it. However it may be a bit top heavy.If you add more value to some of the words and rearrange them differently you can counter the bold "theatrical". If you made "unique" bigger it would flow better i think and it would also enhance its true meaning. Other than that great job!
Hi Sam,
ReplyDeleteBe sure to post your essay for the current project. The question is posted on the course blog a the top.
This is also due for Monday:
All,
Here’s the on-line assignment for today (since I’ve had to cancel class due to the weather)
If you are unable to leave these comments below, please email them to me!
1. Visit 5 of your classmates blogs at this link and leave constructive comments:
http://www.art105bcc.blogspot.com/
2. Your comment must cover the following:
Which three design principles could be considered more carefully in order to improve your (5) classmate’s overall designs, and how should these principles be specifically implemented? Be very specific to receive full credit. Remember, you are critique five (5) different projects made by five of your classmates.
3. With each of the five (5) designs you chose for question #1, choose one (1) personality “word/term” and describe how this word could be adjusted in order to reflect its meaning more accurately. Which design principles should be implemented (and how should they be specifically used) in order to get the “word or personality term” to express its meaning more directly?
Good luck and see you Monday!
Professor Groat
I liked it, but it needed a little more contrast in scale and it seemed a little top heavy, but all in all it was a good peice
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ReplyDeletei agree with the other comments and its a little top heavy but has nice flow from top to bottom but could use a little more contrast. but nice descriptive words...good work
I really enjoy this piece. I also love the words you chose and the truth you put into it. However it may be a bit top heavy.If you add more value to some of the words and rearrange them differently you can counter the bold "theatrical". If you made "unique" bigger it would flow better i think and it would also enhance its true meaning. Other than that great job!
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